... and you're coming up on the very last scene in Act Three, and you think to yourself, "This would be a nice place for a little concluding narration." Which of the following would you choose to have your protagonist say?
1) "I don't know about heaven, but I do believe in angels."
2) "The final gunshot was an exclamation mark to everything that had led to this point. I released my finger from the trigger. And then it was over."
Am I alone in thinking that the choice is obvious? That one of these chunks of dialogue is far, far superior to the other?
I feel like those responsible were thinking: "I was a Ninja. My Kung Fu was strong."
But the truth is: "I wasn't kidding anyone. At best, I was Superman on Kryptonite."
To those who know, let us all take a moment of silence to remember the lost and the damned. To those situated so blissfully in ignorance, don't go looking for heartbreak. You won't find anything there worth watching.
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I have no idea what you're talking about, but are you excited MP3 is being developed as we speak?
Also, do you hate the Mona sniping and guy-wearing-costume protection levels in MP2 as much as I do?
I'm tentatively excited, although a little nervous because Sam Lake isn't writing.
As for MP2, I wasn't crazy about those two levels, although as far as "gimmick" levels go, they weren't too bad.
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